उत्तर

एक जीवन ऐसा ही है
आपके द्वार के आगे
खटखटाते रह गये
आप आयें न पिया

आप तो बना गये
अपनी ही नियम यहाँ
मेरे अनुभव आपको
जचते है इस पल कहाँ

आपकी अपनी दुनिया
आपके अपने स्वप्न
हम कहाँ उस भाग्य के
तत्व की अभीलशा करें….

10 Responses to “उत्तर”


  1. 1 educatedunemployed October 21, 2006 at 6:05 am

    I am not sure what Tatva means.

    Yet I think the two have different contexts.

    The protagonist here seeks companionship of a person who does not seem that keen? Am I right?

    And the links you provided don’t upload, :(

  2. 2 gaizabonts October 21, 2006 at 7:09 am

    ==E&U:
    agreed. :) Tatva is philosophy, a point, or a belief, in this context.

    which links?

  3. 3 adi October 23, 2006 at 4:59 pm

    and i dont think u write for the ppl who visit this space…

  4. 4 gaizabonts October 23, 2006 at 6:58 pm

    ==Adi:
    not many ppl visit this space, anyways ;)

  5. 5 adi October 25, 2006 at 2:03 pm

    i might though ;)

  6. 6 gaizabonts October 25, 2006 at 2:10 pm

    ==adi:
    ur most welcome!

  7. 7 Sangeeta October 25, 2006 at 8:32 pm

    ah but i visited - only i can’t read the language :(

  8. 8 gaizabonts October 25, 2006 at 8:35 pm

    ==sangeeta:
    That’s all right :) you have eight other blogs to choose from ;)

  9. 9 educatedunemployed October 27, 2006 at 7:26 pm

    ha ha ha ..I like that..and I thought the number was nine, which one are you keeping away from us?? :p

  10. 10 gaizabonts October 27, 2006 at 7:45 pm

    ==E&U:
    assumed that she wouldnt understand the marathi blog either - therefore eight - not hiding anything :)

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